January 31, 2009

You can walk, even through dark

Life is short, but running fast
find the spot, and give your part
to reach the task, with remark

Climb the height, beyond your sight
scope is vast, for those who search-
with the thirst, to succeed life march

Keep your step, even in risk
dare to fight, without riot
be in spirit, to win the debate

Forget the last, chances of the past
which will mask, the new supports to catch
more you will get, if you forget that dust

Don't blame the luck, without your act
start to work, without postponing the date
then you can walk, even through dark....


Sweet Repose said...

Beautiful words, I especially love 'Still in the depth of havoc'.

Thanks for stopping by...


Anonymous said...

Thanks for your comment :)

Nioki said...

I love your poetry style. It's so unique. This poem is inspiring.

findingmywingsinlife said...

Interesting poem. I think it gives you something to think on.

fate said...

Nice blog

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Raph G. Neckmann said...

I like the line of your poem, 'Climb the height, beyond your sight scope is vast.'

Thank you for visiting my blog, and your caption for Littl' Nicky's speech bubble.

L. Rochelle said...

I like "don't blame the luck"..good.

OWW/Claire said...

Just beautiful Justin...and so true. Life goes by so fast that if you dare hesitate opportunity is delayed and possibly lost.

And thanks for the opportunity you give me to share in your work and for your visits to my blog.